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My spirit animal is a pink flamingo.

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How does this sound?

 

The children of 

Parents names

Cordially invite you 

To the vow renewal 

And celebration of

50 years of marriage.

On date

At time

At place.

 

 

What do you think?

 

 



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Isn't this a surprise anniversary party, Lily?

Or, did I miss something?confuse



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"Please join us in the celebrating the Golden Anniversary of our parents, ____________ & ____________, at a surprise vow renewal ceremony, on _________ at ___________.

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My spirit animal is a pink flamingo.

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It isn't a surprise anymore.

The way my parents up and take off for days on end, I didn't want to plan something and they take off not knowing about it.

So I told them that we were planning a party for them.

Dad came to me and told me he was going to ask mom to renew their vows.

He is going to "purpose" Valentines.



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Oh, okay.

That makes a difference.smile

I think your original wording sounds fine.



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lilyofcourse wrote:

It isn't a surprise anymore.

The way my parents up and take off for days on end, I didn't want to plan something and they take off not knowing about it.

So I told them that we were planning a party for them.

Dad came to me and told me he was going to ask mom to renew their vows.

He is going to "purpose" Valentines.


 Where will he purpose them?  

I like FNW's  wording.  Sounds a bit more official, elegant?



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My spirit animal is a pink flamingo.

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I'm a dork.

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That is so sweet, Lily. I hope she accepts.

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lilyofcourse wrote:

I'm a dork.


 No you aren't, I am just the grammar police tonight!



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FNW wrote:

That is so sweet, Lily. I hope she accepts.


 Wow, what if she doesn't?confuse



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I know what to do_sometimes wrote:
FNW wrote:

That is so sweet, Lily. I hope she accepts.


 Wow, what if she doesn't?confuse


 Well, then I guess we have a divorce party.

 



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lilyofcourse wrote:
I know what to do_sometimes wrote:
FNW wrote:

That is so sweet, Lily. I hope she accepts.


 Wow, what if she doesn't?confuse


 Well, then I guess we have a divorce party.

 


 That can be fun too!



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